Shaeri-2

by **Humdam** » Sat Sep 06, 2003 8:31 pm

Due to technical problems with last board, I adhered to some of our board members\' advise and started a new board with \"SHAERI-2\". Hope all of you would show the same efforts to shore-up...
 
 
Palatkar aankh nam karna mujhe hargiz nahi aata
 
Gaye lamhon ka gham karna mujhe hargiz nahi aata
 
 
Mohabbat ho to behad ho jo nafrat ho to be paaya
 
Koi bhi kaam kam karna mujhe hargiz nahi aata

by **Radha** » Sat Sep 06, 2003 10:13 pm

Humdam, Adaab! Shayed aap ko pasand aaye, lagta to aisa hi hai.
 
 
Mohabbat ka gawah rahein hain patthar
 
Haqeeqath- e- taj bhi to hain patthar
 
Duniya ka tohfa majnu ko patthar
 
Ishq mein kaatey farhad ney bhi patthar
 
Zubaan - e- ishq boltein hain patthar
 
Mohabbat ke shaan dekhatein hain patthar

by **Humdam** » Sat Sep 06, 2003 10:31 pm

Welcome \"Radhaji\", being the first guest.
 
 
All members: Kulchabhai, Tappebaaz, Shaik, BM, Shahed bhai, aur Kulchi saheba. Aap sab se guzarish hai ke board ki taraf se every week ek lafz diya jaayega jis se aap sab ko sher likhna hai. Is hafte lafz Radhaji ke ashaar se lenge aur wo lafz \"PATHAR\" hai. Isi tarah har board member ko moqah diya jaayega ke wo lafz ka taqarur karey.

by **Kulcha Hyderabadi** » Sun Sep 07, 2003 9:10 am

Kisee patthar ki moorat se muhabbat ka irada hai
 
Paristish ki tamanna hai, ibaadat ka irada hai
 
 
Suna hai har jawan pathar ke dil mein aag hoti hai
 
Magar jab tak na ch\'hedo sharmgee pardey mein soti hai
 
 
Yeh soncha hai ke dil ki baat uskey roo baroo kahdey
 
 
Nateeja kuch bhi nikley aaj apni aarzoo kahdey
 
Har ek bejaa takalluf se baghawat ka irada hai
 
 
Kisee pathar ki moorat se....(Abdul Hai aka Sahir Ludhianvi)

by **shaikh** » Sun Sep 07, 2003 10:59 am

Hum ne jafa naa seekhi
 
Unko wafa naa aaee
 
Patthar say dil lagayaa
 
Aur dil pe chott khaaee

by **Kulcha Hyderabadi** » Sun Sep 07, 2003 12:00 pm

Buton (statutes) shabaashi ho tum par, taraqqi isko kahtey hain
 
Na tarshey to pathar the, jo tarshey to khuda huvey!

by **Humdam** » Sun Sep 07, 2003 3:43 pm

Bahot khoob Kulchabhai!
 
 
\"SUDARSHAN FAKEER\"
 
 
Patthar ke khudaa patthar ke sanam
 
Patthar ke hi insaan paaye hain
 
Tum shahar-e-mohabbat kahate ho
 
Ham jaan bachchaakar aaye hain
 
 
But-khaanaa samajhte ho jisko
 
Puuchcho na vahaan kyaa haalat hai
 
Ham log vaheen se lauTe hain
 
Bas shukr karo lauT aaye hain
 
 
Ham sonch rahe hain muddat se
 
Ab umr guzaaren bhi to kahaan
 
Sehra mein khushi ke phuul nahin
 
Shehron mein gamon ke saaye hain
 
 
Hoton pe tabassum halkaa saa
 
Aankhon mein nami si hai \'Fakeer\'
 
Ham ahl-e-mohabbat par aksar
 
Aise bhi zamaane aaye hain

by **Kulcha Hyderabadi** » Sun Sep 07, 2003 9:02 pm

Bahut bad\'hiyah Humdum. Sudarshan Faakir is a good poet. Jagjeet Singh has made some of his Ghazals memorable. Shall talk about them some other time, bhai Humdum. Aaj dabbey pey giraak bahut hai aur Internet Cafe bhi dhoom se chal rahi hai! Waise Radha ki choice aur taste ka muqaabla karna bahut mushkil hai - main to purani kitaabein aur risaaley chaan chaan kar thak gaya hoon. Ab sonchtha hoon ke hathiyar daal hi doon!!!

by BM » Mon Sep 08, 2003 4:04 pm

Thukraate huwe aaghe baarhe zaat ke patthar
 
Tukraaye buhat hum se mafadaat ke patthar
 
Yeh shehr-e-sitam chain se rehne nahn detaa
 
Har waqt baraste raahe aafaat ke patthar
 
 
Ik shuks ki taqdeer men pholon ki hai barish
 
Auron ke muqaddar men halaat ke patthar
 
Hum kis se karen baat nazar aate hen humko
 
Har shuks ke haathon men mafadaat ke patthar
 
 
Aei dil! Yeh raahe yaad ke khidmaat ke badle
 
Har rukh se chale aayege din raat ke pattar
 
Chun chun ke othaaletaa hon pholon ki tarah men
 
Jab bhi mujhey laghte hen teree baat ke pattar
 
 
Khud ko na bhulaa itnaa bhi zalin-e-imroz
 
Lagh jayenge ik roz makafat ke pattahr
 
Swaleh kaaro bardaasht hai inaam-e-zaman
 
Lamhaat ke kankar kabhee din raat ke patthar
 
 
JK Swaleh

by **shaikh** » Mon Sep 08, 2003 4:46 pm

There is a nazm or ghazal by Rahman Jaami about patthar. Does anyone know?

by **dreamboy** » Mon Sep 08, 2003 5:10 pm

Rhagwan Ram ko Lanka paar karneke vaasthe squirrel choose kiye pathar. Aadmi paheli baar chingar banaya patharon se aur kya kahen patharonke bareme.

by **shaikh** » Mon Sep 08, 2003 7:19 pm

Let me try this.
 
 
Woh patthar jo gilehriyon ne chun kar banaya raasta Ramji ke liye.
 
Woh patthar jis say insaan ne paya roshni ka zariya.
 
Kya hi acchi baat batayee hai hamare dost Dreamboy nay...
 
 
May be Radha can do this better than me.

by **Humdam** » Mon Sep 08, 2003 8:12 pm

Waah \"BM\"! I hope Radhaji ko bhi aapki ghazal pasand aai hogi. Aur, Kulchabhai, dabba band karne se pehle zarooz padhenge aur jo hatyaar daal chukey they wo dubara uthayenge.

by BM » Mon Sep 08, 2003 8:24 pm

Shukriya Hamdam.

by BM » Mon Sep 08, 2003 8:29 pm

Hamaare haatohn ke tarashe howe pathar ke sanam
 
Aaj kisi bot khaane mein bhagwaan baney behte hain
 
 
Pattharon aaj merey sar pay barastay kiun ho
 
Main nay tum ko bhi kabhi apna Khuda rakha hai
 
 
Ab kay socha hey keh patther kay sanam pojaien gay
 
Takeh ghebraien tu ser tekra sakaien mer bhi sekaien

by **Radha** » Mon Sep 08, 2003 8:47 pm

BM, Humdam, Kulcha Bhai and Shaikh, bohut khooooooooooob! Bhai log itni tareef key khabil nahi hun mein, bas aap logoan ki hoslaafzai hai warna hum kis qabil hain. Waisey mujhey bhi is ghazal (I think it\'s a kavita) key baarey mein nahi maloom.

by **Radha** » Mon Sep 08, 2003 9:35 pm

Sab hyderabadiyon ki nazar:
 
 
Ek arsa hua hai us sahar se guzre hue,
 
Raat arse se har ek shaam ke baad aati hai,
 
Jis jagah humne guzaara tha wo bachpan apna,
 
Aaj bhi humko usi sahar ki yaad aati hai,
 
 
Wo Charminar ki jiski haseen sadkon par,
 
Phirtey they maare maare kabhi hum din bhar,
 
Ladbazaar wo ki jiska zikra chhidte hi,
 
Jhhom uthta tha humaare gharon ka har patthar,
 
 
Wo Madina, wo Afzalganj, Qila Khilwat ka,
 
Wo sadkein shaher ki jahan thi mai khela,
 
Wo Abids, wo Mehdipatnam, wo Nampally,
 
Aur dargaon pey itwaar ka bada mela,
 
 
Wo Baag-ai-aam wahan jiska naam sunte hi,
 
Kisi ke aane ki aahat sunai deti thi,
 
Wahin par paas hi to thi badi unchi building,
 
Jahan se shahar ki raunak dikhai deti thi,
 
 
Wo Malakpet ki bani puraani sadak,
 
Jahan ki raatein sitaaron mein doob jaati thin,
 
Wo Abids ka baazaar janhan sunte hain,
 
Nai shaamein thi nayi aag khoob aati thi,
 
 
Wo first Lancer jispar ek puraana ghar,
 
Achaar waali gali ki mahak ka wo manzar,
 
Wo Darulshifa stop ki jisse zara sa aage tha,
 
Kisi buzruq ki mazaar ka patthar,
 
 
Charminar se lagti azeem wo Masjid,
 
Jahan Allah se hum seedhe baat karte the,
 
Wo Charkaman aur woh laal darwaza,
 
Baithkar jispe wahan din ko raat karte the,
 
 
Wo school ki jiski badi deewaron par
 
Nishan aaj bhi kayam hain us jawaani ke,
 
Jis ko soch kar aaj bhi hum rote hai
 
Ye hain panne usi bhooli hui kahani ke,
 
 
Wo L.B. shastri ji ke naam ka bada maidaan,
 
Jahan par bade log khelne ko jaate the,
 
Usi ke peechhe hi to tha nobath pahaad,
 
Jahan se dharti aur aakash nazar aate the,
 
 
Wo ghaat Hussain Sagar ka jiski goad mein aakar,
 
Kisi key doobte din ko salaam karte the,
 
Wo Musi Nadi jo sada khaamosh behti rehti thi,
 
Sab apna apna wahan intzaam karte the,
 
 
Chiken ka kurta ho, ya ho biryani Niagra ki ,
 
Hameedi ki methai ho ya Tajmahal ki Poori,
 
Hum ghirtey padthey par poori naap lete the,
 
Shahar ke is taraf se us taraf ki doori,
 
 
Haya jo ladkiyon mein aaj talak kayam hai,
 
Nasha jo aaj bhi sadkon pe behta rehta hai,
 
Wokhushbuein alag alag tarah ki udti hain,
 
Wo lehza aam ko jo khaas kehta rehta hai,
 
 
Shahar ke ek taraf dekho to ye lagta hai,
 
Siyasaton nein apna haath badha rakha hai,
 
Nazar jo dooji or karte hain to paate hain,
 
Pyar nein pyar ko parwaan chhada rakha hai,
 
 
Wo nazaqat wo nafasat wo taqualluf yaron,
 
Jo kitaabon mein kahin tumne bhi padha hoga,
 
Wahan ki galiyon mein sab aaj bhi muhaafiz hai,
 
Waqt bhi pehle aap kehke hi badha hoga,
 
 
Koi kavita koi ghazal ya koi geet kabhi,
 
Bayan us shahar ka har rang nahin kar sakta,
 
Wahan ki baat hi kuch aur hai chalo chhodo,
 
Dilon se dil ke liye jang nahin kar sakta,
 
 
Wo Hyderabad hai jahan aaj bhi chand aur Sooraj,
 
Har ek raah ko jhuk kar salaam karte hain,
 
Wahan ke dhang aur zabaan sab niraale hain,
 
Hum apna kisaa yahin par tamaam karte hain,
 
 
Magar itni si baat humko aur bataani hai,
 
Kabhi subah to kabhi shaam ke baad aati hai,
 
Jis jagah humne guzaara tha wo bachpan apna,
 
Aaj bhi humko usi sahar ki yaad aati hai.

by BM » Mon Sep 08, 2003 10:00 pm

Vaah vaah kya kheney, Radha! Bahot khoob.

by **Humdam** » Tue Sep 09, 2003 12:53 pm

Bahot khoob Radhaji! Aapne to saare shaher ki sair karwai hai is nazm ko padhkar. Nabeena (blind) bhi aysa mahsoos karey ke uski aankhen lout aayee hai.

by **shaikh** » Tue Sep 09, 2003 1:00 pm

Waah bohot khoob Radhaji. Beautiful. Bilkul aap ki tarhaa...

by BM » Tue Sep 09, 2003 8:29 pm

Her shama bhuji rafta rafta, har khowab luta dheeray dheeray,
 
Sheesha na sahi pathar bhi na tha, dil toot gaya dheeray dheeray!
 
 
Pathar kaha gaya kabhi sheesha kaha gaya
 
Dil jaisi ek cheez ko kya kya kaha gaya!
 
 
Jo na samjha, umar guzar gayi us but-e- kaafir ko samjhaate samjhaate
 
Pighal kar moum ho jaata, agar pathar ko itna samjhaate
 
 
Inhi paththaron pe chal ke aa sako to aao
 
Mere ghar ke raaste mein koi kehkashaan nahi hai
 
 
Sar jukaogay to, pathar devta ho jayega
 
Itna mat chaho usay, woh be-wafa ho jayega!

by **kulchi** » Tue Sep 09, 2003 8:43 pm

SHESHE BHARI GULAB KI PATHAR PER PHOODDOONGI.
 
NEXT TIME AGAR MERI SHAYRI SAY LAFZ NAHI LIYEE TO IS BOARD PER AANA CHOODOONGI.
 
 
LOL:-)

by **Humdam** » Tue Sep 09, 2003 9:28 pm

khush aamadeed \"Kulchi sahiba\". Ye hafte ka lafz \"patthar\" diya gaya aur ye hafte (Saturday) tak rahega aur Sunday se koi aur lafz aap di jiye ga.

by **Radha** » Tue Sep 09, 2003 10:01 pm

Bhaimiya bahot khuuub,
 
Saare middle east mein rehney walon ki nazar:
 
 
Aye khuda ret ke sehra ko samandar karde,
 
Ya chalktee huye aankhon ko bhii patthar karde
 
Aur kuch bhi mujhe darkaar nahiin hai lekin
 
Meri chaadar mere pairon ke barabar karde

by BM » Wed Sep 10, 2003 1:49 pm

Mere deewangi bhi deedni hai
 
Main shesha ho kay pathar say lara houn
 
 
Gul charain gain lehad pay jin saay yai umeed the
 
Vo bhi pathar reakh gay seenay pay dafnanay kay bad
 
 
Dhoom suntay they buhat ham bhi botoun ki qaisar
 
Ja kay but khanay main deeakha to pathar niklaye

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