Zarri nai hai maa bhau hamaari

by **Bhirr Ustaad** » Sat Jun 29, 2002 12:30 am

Zarri Nai hai Maa Bhau Hamari .. 

Aisi fitna bhau hai jo har cheez mey ungliyan karti so 
Ghar me man bhar khana kha ko maikey ku bhi bharti so .

Baccha mera thak ko murda hoko ghar aaya to phir 
Merku YaaNwaaN leko phiro bolko laaDan karti so 

Nanan ka zewar dekh ke to bas aankhyan uskey phirjaatey 
Waisich hona baliyaan bolko ghussa kar ke laRti so 

KaaN phasayi mai Bacchey ku yeh kaisi paaD kamini hai 
Bhukka Dewar ChoR key apne Bhai ke KaamaN karti so 

Kaika tel lagati ki baa Sar mein aisi bo aati 
Jhad key jaana iskey baalaN jispey itta marti so 

LogaaN aye to thoda khaako bolti nai nai nakko ji 
Andhi hoon kya nai malum, In din bhar kitta charti so 

Baccha baher gaya ki aisa khus khus karti merey saath 
KaaN gayi ki apan samajhna Marad ke samney darti so

by **Bhaimiya** » Sat Jun 29, 2002 12:30 am

Bhirr Ustaaz: Good one, kan kan sey larien yaro, wesey tajruba accha hey.

by **Bhirr Ustad** » Sat Jun 29, 2002 12:30 am

Shukriya Bhaimiya....

by **Radha** » Sat Jun 29, 2002 12:30 am

Bhirr Ustad Bhai, Gin ke apne ghar sheshe ke ho dusroan par phattar nahi marte.
Daftar se pine ko jarain ab my unko kya bolun,
Kuch bolun to katne arain ab my unko kya bolun,
Hath nahi hota hai unka ghar ke kaaman karne ku,
Uspo bahar charne jarain ab my unko kya bolun,
Galli ke pottoun se unu kal hi jute khako aaye the,
Ghar me mujh ko maarne aarain ab my unko kya bolun,
Kaju kishmish latun bolko parsun ghar se nikle the,
Aaj phalli phutane leko arain ab my unko kya bolun,
Pehle kabhi dawat me jako dat ko khako aate the,
Ab to ghar ka ghar khajarain ab my unko kya bolun,
Batoun me aako unki thodi galati kar baithi,
Jab se pawan phulko jarain ab my unko kya bolun,
T.V po cricket ke matchan jab se dekh ko aaye unu,
Aate jaate runan banarain ab my unko kya bolun,
Koyle ke business me jaako surat kaali kar baithe,
Chaati derain chaati kharain ab my unko kya bolun,
Race me jarain lekin ghar me bache bhukke marrain,
Bartan zewar bech ko arain ab my unko kya bolun,

by **Bhirr Ustaad** » Sun Jun 30, 2002 12:30 am

Hamarey Radha Bhai,. Dhoom sunayeji pasha tum, chalne do mehnat jaari rakho, ....paawan phule so kissa mazey ka tha bhot:)

by **hina** » Sun Jun 30, 2002 12:30 am

Bhirrbhai and Radha bhai,Please continue the competition. this is just great. Bhirrbhai aap ye kahaan say larahay hain itnay chuninda nazm\'s.They are really very funny.

by **Bhirr Ustaad** » Sun Jun 30, 2002 12:30 am

Salam Hina Apa, 
Kahan se kya ji aapa ,khud likhey so sunaarey, aaplogoun ki hausalafzaahi ka shukriya...

by **Radha** » Sun Jun 30, 2002 12:30 am

Hina and Bhirr ustaad, Aap log mujhe Bhai keh rahe ho, shukriya bahut bahut, aap samajhte hai ke koi ladki is tarah ke jawab nahi de sakti, khair koi baat nahi, aap mujhe kis tarah bhi bulaye, i dont mind. Waise aap logoun ki hausalafzaahi ka shukriya.

by **Bhaimiya** » Sun Jun 30, 2002 12:30 am

Bhirr Ustaad aur Bahen Hina: Aap dono ki ittela key liye Radha Bahen hey Bhai nahi. Chaliye ek aur saati Hina Bahen key liye Bahen (Radha) key roop mein aayee hey.

by **khajabi** » Sun Jun 30, 2002 12:30 am

bhirr, jiyo bahoot khoob, magar tum badi ...... cheez hai baap... radha ki nazm pad ke main bhi shoonch hi raha tha ke \"paawaan phule so....\" pe kuch likhoon, magar usse pehle hi tum taak ke diye.
ba\'her haal, bhir aur radha (chaliye \"ji\" hi bolte hain) bahoot hi zabardaast kalaam tha jari rahne dijye.

by **Radha** » Mon Jul 01, 2002 12:30 am

khajabi, bahut shukriya, shaal mein lapat ke maarne ka. Waise agar mazhaiya shayeri khud par karoge toh acchi lagti hai, doosroan par hasna aasaan hai, khud par hans kar dekho kabhi.

by **khajabi** » Mon Jul 01, 2002 12:30 am

sorry radha ji, i really didn\'t mean anything like that. i was very serious in appreciating you both. englis suit nahi ho rahi hai is mahool main, tu \"mazah\" ka zaouk to hum bhi rakh te hain aur usmain choope hoe paighaam to bhi mahsoos karte hain, magar shayeri ke andaaz main bayaan karna nahi a\'ata.... yeh wooh andaaz/hunar hai jo har kisi ko nahi milta.... wooh uppar wala jisse chahta hai a\'ta karta hai, aap, bhirr ustaad aur shahed to us\'ne chuna hai. keep it up.

by **Radha** » Mon Jul 01, 2002 12:30 am

khajabi, thanks for your comments and i appreciate your thoughts, it was not just for you, that message was for all who were talking about only one sher not all the gazal. The problem is my gender, no man want that any women comment on them, just they think they have rights to comment on womens.

by **Kulcha Hyderabadi** » Mon Jul 01, 2002 12:30 am

\"No man want that any women comment on them, just they think they have rights to comment on women\" - Radha ji, yeh to saraasar ziyaadati hai. Bhai, ham ne kabhi apki posting par nukta cheeni ki hai, aur yeh apne kaise samajh liya ke sab aise hi hotey hain??? please dont generalize....we greatly appreciate your contributions, they make wonderful reading. Please continue and remember, you are precious to us.

by **Radha** » Mon Jul 01, 2002 12:30 am

Kulcha bhai, arey aap naraz math ho na, main apne alfaaz wapas leti hun. waisa aap ki hoslaafzaih ka shukriya,-- Maana ke har haath mein patthar nahi hote, lekin hamare shane par bhi kayee sir nahi hote.

by **Zoya** » Tue Jul 02, 2002 12:30 am

Bhirr Bhai, Wow really hilarious one I enjoyed it a lot waisey jin saas ki apni bahu se nahi banti hai ,woh to bilkul aise hi kahegi.

by **Bhirr Ustaad** » Tue Jul 02, 2002 12:30 am

Aapki Hausla Afzahi ka Shukriya Zoya, Magar ek shikayat hai, Yeh Bhirr Bhai kya hai ?Mereku bhainan nakko aur.

by **Ravi Rajan** » Tue Jul 02, 2002 12:30 am

Wo pakwaan hi kya hai jo dak-kar na ho
Wo mithai hi kya hai jisme shakkar na ho

Wo pakwaan hi kya hai jo dak-kar na ho
Wo mithai hi kya hai jisme shakkar na ho

Wo shayari hi kya hai jiska koyi takkar na ho
Wo shayari hi kya hai jiska koyi takkar na ho

A\'re miyaa.. wo zindagi hi kya hai jisme koyi chakkar na ho

Bahut Khoob Bhirr Ustaad
Lage raho ... lage raho ...

by **Zoya** » Tue Jul 02, 2002 12:30 am

Ok fine, as you wish Bhirr Ustaad. It was good to hear hyderabadi language (aur behnan nakko). Bye ,Take care.

by **Shahed** » Tue Jul 02, 2002 5:26 pm

Hai !! Bhirr Vastaad aur Radha Vastaadima dono ki kya joodi hai ji, kya likhe ji dono,,hai mai sadhque jaaoon, Saari ballayaan waarke apne unglian \'Chatak\' set todoun unpe. Kya likhe bhai Hanste Hanste Aankhoun mein paani aagaya na. Arey zyada nakko hasaayo yaaro gir jaaonga mai kursee se. Waise Radha tou meri Vastaadi ma hai... kuch dinon pehle uno mereku kuch takeed kiye they ke Ashaar dil se likho, waqt aur sahi jagah sher padho .. Aaan yaad hai mere ku sab. Ab dekho raat mein baith ke ek naya Bam tayyar karke leke aatoun. Aaaaan\' Apan bhi thoda thoda uchakna seekh gaye Bola.

by **Shahed** » Tue Jul 02, 2002 5:58 pm

Ghar mein kya WAITAAK hai uska, sabko ghoor ke woh hai daraati , SAAS hammari buddhee lekin ...Acche Acchon ko patak lagaati..Susre Hamaare Bhole Bhaale ... Pension milteich ghar ko aate... Paise kheech ke haat se unke , Ganje sir pe chapat lagaati...Mia Hamaare bade armaanon waale ... Hiras mein aako murgian paale.. Ek bhi murghi chori huvee to .. Saare muhalle ko sir pe Uthaati... Daawat mei isko apni kabhee... mai saath nai le jaati... Dastar khaan pe jo bhi aata .. minton mein woh dakaar jaati.. In ke dos ke waalid aarain ..Sunke uskey aankhaan phat gaye, Zamaane se nai baje so dil ke phir woh taaraan chird gaye.. Bhare daalaaan mein sab ke saamne... dekho taal se ab-bhi taal milaati. Susre hamaare jab taish mein aate ... Kaampte haaton se jab lakdi uthaate... Saadi Pallu Baandh ke Budhee...Bhaag ke Paikhaene mein chupp Jaati.

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