Deewana phir se aaya hai - ek nazm

by **Bhirr Ustaad** » Thu Jul 11, 2002 12:48 am

Mehfil ki Qidamat mein Aadaab arz hai,

EK nayi koshish ...ek taaza nazm....yun to nazm likhna mujhey aata nahin
abhi is shauq ki ibtedaa hi hai....abhee seekh raha hoon .. 
Khaaksaar Bhirr Ustaad .. 

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deewaana phir sey aaya hai 
wohee saaman laaya hai 
usee mailey kuchailey 
pairahan mey liptaa aaya hai 
aur ek shaffaaaf aramaanoun 
ki chaadar saath laaya hai 

deewaana phir sey aaya hai .. 

dua hai aas hai ek pyaas hai 
aankhoun me uskey ab 
ajab ek huuk si uthti hai 
phir sansoun me uskey ab 
wohi cHanni puraana saa 
kaleijaa saath laaya hai 

deewana phir se aaya hai .. 

gumaan aamad ka ho to 
kaifiyat uski anokhee hai 
kafan odhey huwe murdey mein 
jaisey jaan phooki hai 
aur usney taan kar daaman 
tapakta khoon chupaaya hai 

deewana phir se aaya hai .. 

bohot ranjoor hai gham sey 
tum usko cheekh leney do 
phir sanwley haathoun sey 
usko bheek leney do 
isi ik pal ne sadiyoun sey 
use jeena sikhaya hai 

deewana phir se aaya hai

by **Saira** » Thu Jul 11, 2002 10:22 am

Bhirr Ustaad, Bohot khoob...aap naye shaer tu nahin lagte.

by **Bhirr_ustaad** » Thu Jul 11, 2002 11:22 am

phir Kya bohot Naya lagtaa hoon ?

by **Kulcha Hyderabadi** » Thu Jul 11, 2002 1:17 pm

\"Kafan odhey huve murdey mein, jaise jaan phooki hai\"...bahut khoob ustad. Ab yeh bataiyeh apni Shagirdi mein kab shamil karoge hamey bhi?? Very well written, a tremendous start to \"Nazm\" writing. Mustaqbil Roshan Hai.

by **Bhaimiya** » Thu Jul 11, 2002 1:28 pm

Mashallah Bhirr Ustaat, bahut khoob.

by **Bhaimiya** » Thu Jul 11, 2002 3:00 pm

Aagaz ishk ka hey abhee ek nasha mujhey, Anjaam ishk sey na zamaney dara mujhey, Toh ney mujhey bhula diya kuch is ka gham nahee, Ab to bhee yaad aana kabhee bey wafa mujhey, Khulta na raaz ishk mera teri bazam mein, Bas ek nigah-e-lutf ney ruswa kiya mujhey, Yeh gulstaan bhee aaj bayaban deekhayee dey, Fasal-e-bahar toh hi bata kiya huwa mujhey, Toh he nahi toh sheedat ahsaas ki khasam, Saara jahaan lagta hey wehshat kada mujhey, Khaisar hey dil fareeb bahut sher hyderabad, Aata hey yaad phir bhi deeyar gaya mujhey

by **Bhaimiya** » Thu Jul 11, 2002 3:38 pm

Aaj bharee mehfil mein hum unhey chedengey, Suna hey unhey gusey mein lipat janey ki aadat hey?.........

by **Radha** » Thu Jul 11, 2002 3:40 pm

\"bohot ranjoor hai gham sey
tum usko cheekh leney do\" Babut khuuub Bhirr Ustaad, kya kehne.

by **Ucchu Mian** » Thu Jul 11, 2002 4:04 pm

Bhaimiya - Chindiyaan karderain tum to --- Sheran phek phek ke...lajawab shayeri hai bhayee... chalne do ... zabardast jarain...

by **Bhaimiya** » Thu Jul 11, 2002 4:31 pm

Ucchu Mian: Shukriya. Wesey mere sheran phekney sey aaj kal Shahed koh bhi shayeri ka shouk ho gaya (nikla tha mein akela, log aatey gaye karwan badta gaya).

by **Bhaimiya** » Thu Jul 11, 2002 5:00 pm

Badla mejaaz husn to woh ru ba ru nahi, Woh asho wa ada nahi woh guftagu nahi, Dil sey tujhey nikaal key kuch mutmaen toh huwa, Phir bhee kahoon yeh kesey teree justaju nahi, Khusbu na jin key pehley fizaon mein charso, Gulshan mein aesey phulon ki kuch aabru nahi, JAB SEY NIZAM MEKEYDEY BADLA HEY DOSTO, WOH MEY NAHI, WOH JAAM NAHI, WOH SABOH NAHI, Charkey woh doston ney diye hein key allaman, Ab rah wa rasm ki bhi mujhey aarzoo nahi, Udhas har ek taraf hey gheerani ka tazkeyra, Lekin zara bateeye sasta lahu nahi

by **khajabi** » Thu Jul 11, 2002 8:00 pm

Udhas har ek taraf hey gheerani ka tazkeyra, Lekin zara bateeye SASTA LAHU NAHI.... kiya kehne, wah wah, wah wah

by **Bhirr Ustaad** » Fri Jul 12, 2002 12:24 am

SHukriya Radha Bibi hausla afzahi kaa....waisey meri nazar ek puraney board par padhi jo mai shuru kiya tha usmein ek behudaa message hai merey naam sey , jokey kisi ki shararat hai, aur aap ussey barham hogayi....woi wazahat karroun ke mai woh message nahin likha,, bekusoor hoon ..maai laad...lol

by **Bhirr_Ustaad** » Fri Jul 12, 2002 12:25 am

Shukriyaa Kulcha Bhai...Shagirdi kya bhai, aapki sarparasti hona....aap hamaarey chiccha ki umar ke hai..

lol

by **Kulcha Hyderabadi** » Fri Jul 12, 2002 2:44 am

Hogaya na! yeich mushkil hai apne hyderabadion sey! Kawwe ko boley to kawaa jakey pahaad pey.....katey!.

by **Bhirr Ustaad** » Fri Jul 12, 2002 4:33 am

are iski.........kya pailaan aisa ginderey ..kawwa waawa bolkey...achha jando mayoos nakko ho , aajao shagirdi mein mai to bas umar ka lehaaz karkey bola tha nakko bolkey

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