Ek Guzarish hey "Kuch Acchey Sher Sunaiye" - Main Shuru Kart

by **Khatta** » Mon Mar 31, 2003 6:52 pm

Aai phool ...mere phool se kahna ...yeh phool tumharey phool ney bheyja hai

by **Khatta** » Mon Mar 31, 2003 6:53 pm

Aai phool ...mere phool se kahna ...yeh phool tumharey phool ney bheyja hai

by **Awara Badal** » Wed Apr 02, 2003 3:55 pm

Da\'awa karonga hashr mein moosa pe khoon ka
Kyun aab usne di hai mera khatil ki taig ko

by **Dakhni** » Fri Apr 04, 2003 10:27 am

Iss Anjuman Mein Aana Hain Bar Bar
Dar O Deewar ko Ghour Se Pehchan Lijiye

by **Awara Badal** » Sat Apr 05, 2003 6:29 pm

Magas ko na jaane deejeo baagh mein:
Ke na haq khoon hoga parwaane ka:

Is there anyone who could understand and post the actual in-depth meaning of this shair? Can anyone explicitly explain what actually the poet (shayer) wanted to say in here? No guesses please!!! Need the perfect and sensible answer. Thanks...

by **un ki yaad mein** » Sat Apr 05, 2003 11:51 pm

bhoolen hain rafta rafta unhe muddaton mein hum,
qiston mein khudkushi ka maza koi hum se poochhe

by **un ki yaad mein** » Sun Apr 06, 2003 12:03 am

\"magas\" - honey bee
\"ko na jaane dena baagh mein\" - coz when a honey bee goes to the garden (baagh) it\'ll suck nectar and later that\'ll be processed for making honey and wax
\"na haq parwane ka khoon hoga\" - when the parwana wanders around the shama, (thats the candle light, made out of wax) it gets killed
kyon bhai...sahi hai?? tried my best to xplain it \'explicitly\' (and made it sound like some kind of chem lab xperiment!)

by **Awara Badal** » Sun Apr 06, 2003 11:46 am

Maan gaye bhai... Un ki yaad mein, you have done it. Hats off to you man! You are the man, I have to admit that. Thanks...

by **un ki yaad mein** » Sun Apr 06, 2003 10:03 pm

well, awara badal, thanks for that... but hey, i\'m not a man, i\'m a woman!

by **Awara Badal** » Mon Apr 07, 2003 4:05 pm

Ooops...Sorry for that un ki yaad mein and thanks for the clarification, atleast this won\'t happen in the future. Actully, there was no any indication about the gender in all your previous messages and thats how......Anyways, sorry again. I hope you don\'t mind.

by **Machomodelhunk** » Sat Apr 12, 2003 4:38 am

\"Kazi Sharrab pine de masjid Mein baith kar ,ya phir wo jagah bata jahan par Khuda na ho\"

\"Phir najar se pila deejeye hosh mere uda deejeye choriye dushmani ki namish ab zara muskura deejeye\"

\"Aaj itni bhi mayaesar nahin maykhane mein,Log kahtey hain peekey mein hosh mein nahi ab hosh hi kahan raha Zamaney mein\"

by **Dakhni** » Sat Apr 12, 2003 11:06 am

Machomodelhunk I think you havent completed this sher Aaj itni bhi mayasar nahi maikhane mein....As far as I know the complete sher is like this

Aaj itni bhi mayasar nahi maikhane mein
Jitni hum choda karte the paymane mein

by **Jatinder** » Sat Apr 12, 2003 1:38 pm

Aik dinn Mere paas se woh guzzrey Dil rukh gayaa... Phir jab ik nazar dekhaa unko waqt bhi thahar gaya Qayamat thi is dil pe unka yun aana halke kadam chalna madhosh kar jaana Thi zubaan chup aur saansein ruki huyi par nazaron nai humaari kiya bayaan fasana

by **zafar** » Sat Apr 12, 2003 4:04 pm

Zindagi ko na banalay woh sadaa mera baad, hounsla dena unha mera khuda mera baad, Kaun ghoonghat ko oothaiga sitamgar kah kar, kis ka aana ki karanga woh dua mera baad, \\\\

by **Awara Badal** » Sat Apr 12, 2003 5:58 pm

Thujh ko jaate huae dekh ke sambhle ga na yeh dil
Is ko baataon mein laga loon to chale jayeega

by **Khatta** » Sat Apr 12, 2003 6:54 pm

\"Shaam hotay he chiragoon ko bujadayta hoon..... Yeh Dil he kafi hai tayre yaad may jaljanay ko....\"

by **Awara Badal** » Sun Apr 13, 2003 4:23 pm

Maine kabhi zid to nahin ki par aaj shab.... Aaye mahe-jabeen na ja ke aaj tabiyath udhas hai

by **zafar** » Sun Apr 13, 2003 6:49 pm

Kuch haar puro daalo kuch guldasta manga rakho, shayad key woh ajaya darwaza khula rakho...

by **Awara Badal** » Mon Apr 14, 2003 3:12 pm

Na gul khile hain na un se mile hain na maye (sharab) pi hai... Ajeeb rang mein ab ke bahar guzri hai

by **zafar** » Mon Apr 14, 2003 3:44 pm

...bahar tu phir bhi aayagi, woh nahi aati jis ka intezaar...

by **Awara Badal** » Tue Apr 15, 2003 4:20 pm

Ab main samjha tere rukhsar pe til ka matlab....
Daulat-E-Husn pe darban baitha rakha hai

by **Saira** » Fri Apr 18, 2003 12:54 pm

jane us shaqs ko yeh kaisa hunar aata hai..shaam hoti hai tu ankhon main utar aata hai.

by **Jatinder** » Fri Apr 18, 2003 5:48 pm

Mujh Se Mut Pouch, Mere Dil Ki Kahani O Hum-Dum 
Is Main Kuch Parda-Nashinon Ke Bhi Naam Aate Hain

by **deewana** » Fri Apr 18, 2003 7:45 pm

a khuda kuchh aisa kar ki maut aa jaye par gham na de......waada kar k bhool jaye jo mujhe aisa hamdam na de...aadab arzz hai

by **Awara Badal** » Sat Apr 19, 2003 3:06 pm

Sar se girthi hai to shaanaon pe bikhar jaati hai...
Tune in zulfaon ko bada sar pe chadha rakha hai...

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