Hyderabad ke dawakhane

[Radha]

mujhe luut ko saare doctor behaal karko choRhe
meri jaan to bachaye par kangaal karko choRhe

Hyderabad ke hospital me ilaaj my karayee
mujhe cheer phaad karko bangaal karko chode

mera jism tha ji aisa chaadar ho koi jaisa
kaat chaant karko tuwwal karko chode

ghar waala mujhko meri biryaani bolta tha
nammak na mirchi jaisi ab daal karko chode

goliyaan bhi kya khilaye ki dawa bhi kya pilaye ki
sawanli thi myto pehle ab laal karko chode

[Bhirr Ustaad]

Salaam Radha bibi,
Aapka Kalaam pasanad aaya, waisey to mai khud seekh raha hoon, to aapko bhi salaah doonga ke aap apney kalaam mein wazan ka thoda khayaal rakhein, Issey padhney mein kalaam balanced aur rhythmic lagta hai.<br>
Urdu Shayeri ka pehla sabaq --Behr ka hota hai, yaani meter
ka -- sher ke do misrey aur poori ghazal meter mein ho to mazahiya ho ya kuch aur ghazal, ghazal kehlaati hai thodi si liberty lekey aapkey kalaam mein kuch changes kiye haiN, ummeed hai ke aap mind nahin karengi <br>
..<br>
Yeh Daaktaran mereku behaal karko choRhe<br>
meri jaan bachaye lekin kangaal karko choRhe <br>
Osmania key andar, kaikaa ilaaj bawaa <br>
Bas cheer phaad karko bangaal karko chode <br>
Chaadar ke waisa poora saabit tha badan meraa<br>
ajee kaat chaant karko tuwwal karko chode<br>
Duley ki apni pehley Biryani thi mai Khaala<br>
Mereku ku phikki seeti ab daal karko chode <br>
goliyaan khilaako kaaley araQaaN pila ko neelay <br>
Merey saanwley badan ku ab laal karko chode <br>....Aajiz

[Radha]

Bhirr Ustaad, Bahut Bahut Shukriya, mein abhi toh nau seekh hun, koshish karti hun kuch likh sakun, agar isi tarah aap ki inayath rahi toh kuch na kuch to seekh hi gaaoongi.

[kalia]

kaam na dhanda,kaikoo to bi waqt barbaad kartey logaan apna bi doosroun ka bi

[Bada bhai]

Kalia: Tu yahan per kya kar-rahahai, ja jakey saab jo kaam diye woh pura kar warna ek din tanka cut jayegee.